So I've been thinking about writing a novel, here's a super quick summary of the plot, just tell me what you think.

So the protagonist is an intelligent, sensitive, young man, about 20, (somewhat resembling me but only slightly) who has recently begun to question the purpose of life. Then because of a family incident he has to make a trip to his hometown which is in another state but because he's afraid of flying he chooses to drive all the way.

On the way he picks up a cute redheaded full-breasted hitchhiker about his age, maybe better one or two years younger, who then shows him on the road trip why life is still worth living and leads him on a journey of self-exploration. They also totally get it on. Later we find out that she only has a short time to live and wanted to see the ocean before it was all over. The protagonist is of course saddened by her death but understands that her last act of kindness was her leading him on the right path.

The missing sections are filled with eating ice cream and looking at the stars at night wondering how strange it is to be anything at all.

So, opinions?

redheaded full-breasted hitchhiker about his age, maybe better one or two years younger

Just fucking write a fictional greentext porn story already jesus

Где конфликт, где антагонист, дружок? Скучно выходит.

>>1
so you gotta read more books to get a good writing style, ya can't just write shit and expect it to be good so yeah
anyway sounds good so continue dawg

It needs a BDSM scene or you won't get the legions of sex deprived middle aged white women

>>1

implying the beautiful hitchhiker wouldn't be picked up by a psycho and raped and chopped into little pieces first

hot girls don't hitchhike, it's asking to be raped at best

Just make sure it's realistic mate otherwise it'll just be yet another Twilight tier fanfiction.

>>5
Would be difficult just finding a whip on the trip but maybe I can come up with something

Ive read a lot of extremely similar books. You will have to find a way to set yours apart for it to gain traction. Unless you arent doing it for money or popularity and are doing it just to do it. In which case do whatever you want.

this is the dumbest fucking thing i've ever heard... you sound like you should be teaming up with wes anderson to write the porn version of little miss sunshine.

>>1
fuck off outta here m8 /book/ aint for your type

>>1
I barely got through the first paragraph without falling asleep. It's a lousy plot--what I could force myself to read of it.

Writing, in addition to talent, also requires writing skills, like an understanding of sentence structure and punctuation. Go back to school and learn those skills, then think up a plot that is not mind numbingly boring, then submit another draft for evaluation--assuming that 4ct's /book/ still exists a year from now.

What anime is this?